|Sweet Baby Feet by Margaret O Hair|
Yes! Editors want you to rhyme for this age group. In fact, many of my published friends sell rhyming text even though editors (as well as agents) say they don't want this type of book. One friend even was asked to change her prose INTO rhyme. Wow.
Before I go into the analysis of SWEET BABY FEET by Margaret O Hair, I want you to take a look at that baby on the cover. Can we just say a collective AWWWW!!! SO CUTE!!! I normally won't highlight the illustrator in these kinds of posts, but Tracy Dockray draws the most precious babies on the planet. :-)
Now the real reason editors go out to conferences and tell you they absolutely don't want to receive a rhyming text is that like singing for American Idol, most people don't do it well. And you need to have the talent to rhyme or forget it. Margaret O Hair is by far the most talented rhymer I've ever read. She's actually a rhyming genius. If you give her a theme or topic, she can come up with a funny rhyme that works in an instant. She does this at parties. Everyone loves her! And at the very least, if you're interested in rhyme, you should pick up one of her books and study how flawless her rhyme scheme is.
SPOILER ALERT! My picture book analyses will reveal the climax/ending to every story. So be forewarned!
Genre: Baby board transitional, Concept, Rhyming text
Synopsis: Follow the footsteps of baby as he scampers from morning until nap time with his busy little feet.
Plot elements: A Cycle of the Day story.
- Morning time--wake up
- morning activities: getting dressed, feeding time, walking/toddling around
- game time--hide and seek, watching tv, playing with pets, finger paints
- taking a bath
- Climax--baby races mama, tiring her out
- Twist Ending--naptime (for Mama, not baby) Twist
Most books in this genre are cycle of the day stories or journey stories where the text takes you on a journey from one place to another. There is still much going on, although the climax isn't as apparent. In this story, the climax is just a heightened activity that will set up the twist ending. And as in most fiction picture books, there needs to be a twist at the end or a surprise. In this story, Mama is so tired from chasing baby all day long, she's ready for a nap, but not baby.
Now what made this very simple story a keeper in the eyes of the editors? The writing! Are you amazed? LOL! But it is more than that. Margaret looked at the market and found that there weren't any books celebrating baby's feet. FEET! Not only are baby's feet cute, but it's an original concept. It also lends itself to a sequel about maybe baby's hands, too! Hmm...I wonder if we'll be seeing that book in the future?
- Perfect meter and unforced rhyme scheme--"Morning time!/Feet are bare./Stretch them,/ wave them/Through the air. This meter and scheme is the same throughout. It's what we call an ABCCB scheme and the meter is catchy and upbeat. You can almost hear the pitter patter of the feet with the rhythm of the text.
- Funny or active pictures--Margaret thought about each picture and how it might delight babies and parents. For example: baby is throwing food, toddling with his dog, crying, hugging mama, etc.
- Use of active verbs and adjectives throughout--for example, baby is tumbling, on tippy toes, peeking, playing, waddling. Baby's feet are chubby, cuddly, bouncy, etc.
- Use of metaphor and surprise--for example, baby's shoes are the ones playing hide and seek
- A sense of rhythm: you bounce along with the baby. Ex: Love this song!/Feel the beat./Tap those chubby/baby feet!
If you take a look at the book and focus on each stanza, you will find a lively text that is adorable in execution that's really hard to do.
I hope this helps you understand a different genre that you might not know is out there. It's a growing market. Of course this is just one example of the board book market. I hope to show you many different examples because I've heard this market is needed out there.
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